by Chris Mar 9, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Swiftly and silently the axe came down |
by Chris
Thanks alot, I wrote this a couple of months ago, but only the first 2 and a half verses...I originally wanted to make this like an epic tale, but I got impatient and forgot about it till last week and then just wrapped it up. It was supposed to be a story about an unbelieveable force or demon that was manifested by the anguish of one person, which was released on his death to flood everything and everyone with its malevolence....but I got bored, lost perspective and just finished it quickly |
by Shædow Poet
Very well written, I liked how each lines rolled together with rhyming words that seemed so natural. |