this poem is not crap n i gave it 5/5

*jen-jen*

i like it too!!!!!!!!! thanks for commenting. i love your poem its really a cool way to look at things. great work
~cort~

btw what is your sn?

my sn is BriskBiscuit... i've IMd you a few times and you didnt respond. lol. i guess that was my bad, tho, for not telling you who it was
*Zac*

now...why would anyone vote that on one of YOUR poems? It was really good Zach, dont be so hard on yourself.

oh, it IS crap! omg, you guys are nuts! it deserves no more than a 2...TOPS! ty for commenting, tho. luv y'all!
*Zac*

OMG!!! THIS IS NOT CRAP!! DON"T TELL PEOPLE THAT!! lol, just show some confidence in your poem. There really are some people who just go around rating some of the best poems 1's just because they fell like it. Hun, you don't give yourself ENOUGH credit. This poem was beautiful!! I really liked it!! I'll agree with you it isn't your best, but its definitely good. (no offense itended there, lol). I really really liked it, and you've received a lot of comments, so it must be good!!

xoxoxo
Sierra

btw, if you ever get around to it, I do have a sn. NternalSilence57

I sort of like that sn, lol.

Hmm.
Well.
Honestly. I have to disagree with my first comment on this poem. It is FAR BEYOND not your best. It's probably one of my favorites. The way its written, the style every last thing down to the text style is beautiful.

Wonderful job, m'love.

Far beyond meaning far BETTER, lol

AHH! Last comment on this one, I swear, lol.
But keep in mind, i watched your photograph burn.

And the way you write this out to be, you make it sound like less than a true tragedy, but what you see and what I actually saw in real life, are far apart.

it was a tragedy in the highest, beyond cruel and unusual punishment. And the most devastating event to any person in love.