by JustAFoolInLove Mar 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I have a dead heart bleeding |
by Just Sierra
Whoa! I just realized! You wrote like....5-6 poems on the same date, including this one. All on the 9th of march, 2005. |
by Just Sierra
lol, I would change the last line to "I hope I see you in Hell,", but that's just me. The imagery was flawless, magnificent!!! I liked how you didn't just drop the I have a dead heart bleeding after the first stanza. Very nice!! I love you babe. WONDERFUL POEM!!!! |
it's not how i feel. it wasnt about anyone. lol, just a poem, ya know? not really ABOUT anything at all. |
by courtney
awww... so sad... i hope your ok |
Wow...That is good...really really good. |