Dead Heart Bleeding

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 10, 2005


I have a dead heart bleeding
All over the place
I have a dead heart bleeding
When I look at your face

I have a dead heart bleeding
When you are nearby
I have a dead heart bleeding
No matter how hard I try

I have a dead heart bleeding
Why are you in my life?
I have a dead heart bleeding
That’s why I use this knife

I have a dead heart bleeding
So, now I bid you farewell
I have a dead heart bleeding
Hope I don’t see you in Hell!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Whoa! I just realized! You wrote like....5-6 poems on the same date, including this one. All on the 9th of march, 2005.

    How incredible that you never run out of inspirational ideas.

    A true poet if I ever did see one. -points at you-

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    lol, I would change the last line to "I hope I see you in Hell,", but that's just me. The imagery was flawless, magnificent!!! I liked how you didn't just drop the I have a dead heart bleeding after the first stanza. Very nice!! I love you babe. WONDERFUL POEM!!!!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    it's not how i feel. it wasnt about anyone. lol, just a poem, ya know? not really ABOUT anything at all.
    *Zac*

  • 19 years ago

    by courtney

    awww... so sad... i hope your ok
    great poem
    ~cort~

  • Wow...That is good...really really good.