Wow...That is good...really really good.

awww... so sad... i hope your ok
great poem
~cort~

it's not how i feel. it wasnt about anyone. lol, just a poem, ya know? not really ABOUT anything at all.
*Zac*

lol, I would change the last line to "I hope I see you in Hell,", but that's just me. The imagery was flawless, magnificent!!! I liked how you didn't just drop the I have a dead heart bleeding after the first stanza. Very nice!! I love you babe. WONDERFUL POEM!!!!

~Sierra

Whoa! I just realized! You wrote like....5-6 poems on the same date, including this one. All on the 9th of march, 2005.

How incredible that you never run out of inspirational ideas.

A true poet if I ever did see one. -points at you-