As always thank you every who has either voted or has made a comment about this poem, i really appreciate all imput, if you have some negative imput, feel free to write about that as well, i enjoy all comments good or bad i'll remember it. Becuase they were all told in my deliverance.

Signed,
Shaun Aka Dark Savior

doctors are coming to get me to mentally molest me
they would kill me cause their's no way to correct me

I REALLY LOVE THAT FOR SOME REASON, IT STOOD OUT LIKE CRAZY, WELL DONE SWEETHEART! AND THE MASKS ARE SO DAMN TRUE BUT I HATE IT! BUT GREAT POEM, 5

WITH LOVE,
HEATHER

EXCELLENT poem i liked it a lot as long with all the others i love everything you do. cant wait to read some more stuff. thanks for your comments they are greatly appreciated

~!~Noelle~!~

Hey..Wow this poem was excellent. I really like it, the words you use, and the way you use them is just so unexplainable! I like these lines..'I'm not some ancient evil nor the devil, we all began at the very same level''..that stuck out to me a lot..but the whole poem was very well written! Keep it up!!
Great job..5outta5 for sure!
Shannon

friggin awesome..u are a great writer..keep up the good work
p.s. u misspelt essence in the title...

AMAZING, i think this poem is is on the level, i think alot like this poem, geat stuff!!!!!!!!!!

excellent poem! i really loved it! it was so dark and it was just so...i dunno how to say it, but just really wonderful. excellent piece pf poetry! keep it up, youre an excellent writer!

~*LorienElf*~

very dark and mysterious, i like it! wonderful and compelling writing...cant wait to read more!

Hiiii Shaun...this poem is pretty amazing, like yourself.

"I'm the essence of evil you all should know
i don't have a special marking nor my eyes do glow"

^ I think it'd be better as "...nor do my eyes glow"

I think the ending is especially powerful...I like it...

xxx