These brown eyes

by tragic   Mar 10, 2005


If you look into my eyes
I guarantee
You wont see happiness
just pure insanity

If you look into my eyes
you wont see a happy man
Only cold emotion
That you cant understand

If you look into my eyes
you'll see them blood shot
enough pain to make you sick
You'll be feeling gut rot

If you look into my eyes
you will see pain
an abundance of anger
running through these veins

If you look into my eyes
They turn away
I don't want you to know
I'm afraid of what you'll say

If you look into my eyes
You'll see they are brown
But never with a smile
Only a deep frown

If you look into my eyes
you'll come to realize
that theres a story
Right behind these brown eyes

plz rate/comment it would mean a lot to me and ill return the favour

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  • 19 years ago

    by ShatteredAngel

    Life sucks hey.. =( But everything happens for a reason. Like you say in your profile, everything makes you stronger. If the events that happened to you (Whatever they may be) hadn't of happened, then you wouldn't be the strong person you are today. Some people mightn't learn the lessons you've learnt until they're older, and by then, it might be too late. I'm just babbling on here so ignore me lol. Anyway - the point is - Hang in there. It will all seem worth it one day. I promise =) xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Brilliant poem, full of emotion, i loved it. take care xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by tragic

    thank you all!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    i like this poem alot, its very emotional and it seems to have come right from your heart - thats where the best poems begin. well done, you have a talent
    bets wishes
    - shell

  • 19 years ago

    by black_hearted_lover

    That is a very imotional poem I like the way you used your eyes to express yourself. I like sad poems and that is probably one of my favorites