wonderful poem, I really enjoyed it, honestly. I liked the structure that you put into this poem, it is a unique poem and i liked how it ws played out. Very well writen and very well thought out.

Five/Five

wow that was execellent. really loved i. rated it a 5. keep writing. ~nikki~

wow that was really good. very nice. it flowed very well. great job. keep it up. :p

Yes!! Bravo!! This was wonderful. I love how the lines were set up.. easy to read and it kept the same pattern on down through the poem.. once again all your words flowed wonderfully.. I love your poems. Never stop writing!

W-O-W!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! W311 wr!tt3n
! 10v3d !t. Gr3at w0rk.

B04413 ( BoNnIe)

A few flow issues here and there, but the emotion and expression you brought out more than make up for it. Well done.