Can't you see?

by Brittany   Mar 10, 2005


I love you!
I always have.
I always will.
Can't you see I care more than anyone?
Can't you see?

Can't you see it hurts so bad to see her touch you the way I want to?
Can't you see she doesn't care the way I do for you?
Can't you see she's just some girl who thinks it's all fun and games?
Can't you see?
Can't you see?

*Sorry if it's not that great I'm new at this...someone told me writing would help.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    Thankyou very much :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ele

    this is a gr8 example that poems don't have to ryhme to be gud. this is excellent an i hope to hear more from u