Perfect Girl

by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥   Mar 10, 2005


Hello, perfect friend
With perfect hair
So straight and shiny
You dress with such care

I’ve seen your perfect life
Your perfect little home
Loving mom and dad
I never see you alone

Your perfect voice
You sing, and you win
Trophies and rosettes
Perfect icon, pretty and thin

Perfect boyfriend
His red sports car
With the top down
Already living like a star

A perfect family reunion
I saw them arrive, all smart
And leave smiling brightly
Oh didn’t you inherit a good heart

Your grades perfects A’s
Scholarship to a top university
Perfect curled writing
And uniform made so pretty

Everyone’s favorite perfect girl
The envy of the school
A friend to every kid
Don’t you just have it all?

Oh, perfect girl, you don’t know
What I saw that night in the dark
The needle in your arm
And the fifty something man in the park

I watched you go home
Transforming under the stars
Perfect girl? Sold yourself for morphine.
Oh, and what about those scars ... ?

© Copyright Sharon Ardern 2005

* I have a temptation to explain this poem, and it's ending, but then poems are meant to make you think. so I won't deny my readers that. Though I'm sure it won't take too long too work out ....
* Right well people are having trouble, so here's a hint: do any of you ever feel way too pressured to live up to to standards and every do ... things ... to try and cope? well i gave it away really. it's about what's going on inside can be so different from the outside, pressures in what appear 'perfect' families may seem OK, but they can be harsh ...

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  • Hey i absoloutly love this poem!
    its so well written.
    i know what it is like to have to try to live up to expectations, and then fail, break inside, but still pretend your perfect.
    amazing poem, ive added you to my favorites, k?
    love mel

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    no one ever expected me to be sad or lonly inside i always looked so perfect with my family you described what people thought of me to a tee until they found out about my past /present they were definatly not expecting what they heard oh well i think this is what you were saying of its what i thought you were saying anyway hope to hear from you soon hun hope everything is ok luv jen x x x

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    awww so sad :( Beautiful write hun...you're so amazing...I hope all is well with you babe xxxxx<33

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    I think I get it... maybe! Some people aren't as perfect as they seem? I dunno! Well it was a good poem, keep it up xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Emzie

    okay i got it till the last 2 verses and then i got lost. ah well. it's good though ;D
    loadza love E x