okay i got it till the last 2 verses and then i got lost. ah well. it's good though ;D
loadza love E x

I think I get it... maybe! Some people aren't as perfect as they seem? I dunno! Well it was a good poem, keep it up xxx

awww so sad :( Beautiful write hun...you're so amazing...I hope all is well with you babe xxxxx<33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

no one ever expected me to be sad or lonly inside i always looked so perfect with my family you described what people thought of me to a tee until they found out about my past /present they were definatly not expecting what they heard oh well i think this is what you were saying of its what i thought you were saying anyway hope to hear from you soon hun hope everything is ok luv jen x x x

Hey i absoloutly love this poem!
its so well written.
i know what it is like to have to try to live up to expectations, and then fail, break inside, but still pretend your perfect.
amazing poem, ive added you to my favorites, k?
love mel