Wow! That was one powerful poem, had a slightly dark feel to it, I liked the format aswell, all the good qualities for a *5/5*, good work, keep it up xxx

great poem...i like keep writing

Frightening poem, well done, I always like a nice scare before bed time, very well written, Keep it up, much love xxxx

Wow! Usually I understand poems the instant I read them, but for yours I had to sit and think for a minute or two. It was very deep. Good job! Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance.

Another great poem not sure what to say about this one except wow! U are very good!