~ lovely poem, beautiful!
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Exellent job on this poem. Feelings from the heart I like that! Check out some of mine if u would and let me know what u think! Thanx!

That was wonderful, I am truly impressed. Keep writing, I look forward to reading new ones

wonderful poem~!!~ keep it up. love it.

oh and katie would you please vote on my new poem too. means alot to me thanks

This is a really beautiful and emotional poem. Good Job! Love Emma xxx

this is a bangin poem i love it if u would jus change all the she's and her's to him and he's it would b the perfect poem for me 5/5

Yes and yes lol

good job, i liked this poem, some of the rhymes seemed like they were forced, but it was still really good, great job!!

The poem flows with love in it.
It makes me smile. ;)

another good one.

ur fab hunni keep writin and hpe stuff works out 4 ya eventually xxx