Awe...hugs to you, Shannon, how sad! well i love you like a lil sis (altho we've never met hehe) ur a great girl, dont let n e one tear u down

much love,
Heather

Oh I'm so sorry! I wish she would have cared for you more. I wish I had an older sis that would take care of me. Read some of my stuff if you ever get a chance.

I thought it was very well done and i liked the message behind it. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Loved these two bars the most.

Your words don’t mean anything
So please, spare me the lies
Cause your actions show me nothing
No more hurt will cry from these eyes

Five/Five

Great poem.

AWW!!! Shannon!! That was incredible!!!!! You have such a talent in poetry. The whole thing sounded so natural. My favorite stanza is:

Your words don’t mean anything
So please, spare me the lies
Cause your actions show me nothing
No more hurt will cry from these eyes

The last line really, really touched me. So, overall, congragulations on a fantasitc poem.

btw, this is random, but I really like how you wrote your sn. It looks spectacular, lol, I like that word.

~Sierra

Very emotional poem and very well wrote im sorry you have had to feel this pain, keep the good writing up you have talent!!

take care

wow... this was REALLI good u got a five from me it reminds of a situation im goin through right now

amazing poem!!! im really sorry you have to go through this. Hope everything turns out for the best between u and ur sis. beautiful poem! keep up the great work!
Ariane
-xXx-

hahaha, thats what I said too.

Hey great poem

Wow! That last stanza really got me. An amazing poem!!! Great job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx

wow... what can i say... that was really good.5/5
love,
~Katie~

Oh wow....I am super impressed. I'm just in awe so I won't say anymore so I can just enjoy the glory I feel after reading your poem!

really touching poem, liked how you started and finished it. keep your head up and stay strong, lu -x-x-x-

Another great poem, has da same name as 1 of mine :) keep writin coz dis was really touching.
ltp xx

Hey ur sis sounds lik my bro they dont care wat you do unless it causes a problem with wat they HAVE to do ..ya right they dont have to do anything well check me out some time