Dead boy's poem

by Oliver Stevenson   Mar 10, 2005


Dead boy’s poem

So calm, so quiet
No one around to be heard
A lonely child sat crying
His only company his heart, layered
So many times that no one could help him
Each and every tear making him tired

Fed up with his school
Fed up with his life
What could this poor child do?
Other than take it in his strife?
What would you do if it were you?
Would you be able to handle that life?

That lonesome child woke up every morning
To only hear the sounds of silence
Every time the sun is dawning
He sits alone in patience
Until someone some one comes to save him
And bring him to his senses

It’s all too much for him to take
He couldn’t stand the pressure
He knew that he was about to break
This he knew for sure
It got too far, too much at stake
He knew that there wasn’t a cure

So he sat alone with his layered heart
Crying out for some one to save him

No one came...

(This poem is to those who feel that there is too much that they can’t handle, i'll pray for those who need guidance if they are lost. Good luck to you who need it and I am here for anyone :))

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    You're welcome, any time. I can understand that perfectly because I'm going through some extremely rough times too. And despite how i'm constantly afraid, I've written a few hopeful poems, lol. (People at school are always telling me to write happy poems because they're sick of my sad poems, but it doesn't bother me none because I kick their shins :-D.) But if it makes you feel any better, just write sad poems, any kind as long as you come back more often. You are rarely on this site anymore. Its lonely, :*-(.

    Ok, well maybe not exactly LONELY, but its close. lol. Take Care, write back soon.

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    :) that made me smile, thank u so much, yeah things have been bad and i'm not sure how they are going to turn out, hopefully ffor the best, thank u so much :) xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Ahh, oliver, you've got me curious. What's wrong? What is so bad? Surely things could be worse....talk to me some time. I really want to know how you are. I never hear from you. You rarely visit this site anymore and I miss hearing from you.

    Same as every other person on this site, you can talk to me if you want. Though I know you probably won't need to because you've got Toni, I'm just saying, lol, I'm here too.

    luv ya lots, take care, hold in there, keep your head up.

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    aww hun its awesome, im always here for you u no. and i no uve bin here for me. luv ur work,
    take care,
    u can always talk to me netime,
    ellie
    xoxoox

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    aww hun its awesome, im always here for you u no. and i no uve bin here for me. luv ur work,
    take care,
    u can always talk to me netime,
    ellie
    xoxoox

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