Good poem Hun, liked the wording and the imagery was flawless! Good job xxxx

:) thank u xxx

Great!!! Applaud!! Bravo, Oliver. That was considerate of you to write this for people like me and I really appreciate it. By your other poems, you've got me wondering if you're going through a rough time too. Are you? You hardly ever post anymore, so I'm happy to see you're still up and running!! Your poetry has improved a great deal and I really, really like this poem. So, congratulations on, yet again, another fantastic poem!!

~Sierra

Yeah i am at the moment but i put things in perspective by trying to help other people, i try to do what i can to help. thank u hun :) xx

aww hun its awesome, im always here for you u no. and i no uve bin here for me. luv ur work,
take care,
u can always talk to me netime,
ellie
xoxoox

aww hun its awesome, im always here for you u no. and i no uve bin here for me. luv ur work,
take care,
u can always talk to me netime,
ellie
xoxoox

Ahh, oliver, you've got me curious. What's wrong? What is so bad? Surely things could be worse....talk to me some time. I really want to know how you are. I never hear from you. You rarely visit this site anymore and I miss hearing from you.

Same as every other person on this site, you can talk to me if you want. Though I know you probably won't need to because you've got Toni, I'm just saying, lol, I'm here too.

luv ya lots, take care, hold in there, keep your head up.

~Sierra

:) that made me smile, thank u so much, yeah things have been bad and i'm not sure how they are going to turn out, hopefully ffor the best, thank u so much :) xxxxx

You're welcome, any time. I can understand that perfectly because I'm going through some extremely rough times too. And despite how i'm constantly afraid, I've written a few hopeful poems, lol. (People at school are always telling me to write happy poems because they're sick of my sad poems, but it doesn't bother me none because I kick their shins :-D.) But if it makes you feel any better, just write sad poems, any kind as long as you come back more often. You are rarely on this site anymore. Its lonely, :*-(.

Ok, well maybe not exactly LONELY, but its close. lol. Take Care, write back soon.

~Sierra