by Edina Mar 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
All perfect u may seem |
by Timothy
interesting piece, significant and different. I appreciate it for its' originality and honest reality. I hope maybe one day pretending will pass and the real you will return the look through the mirrored glass. Here's to survival and the walk of life - don't do it according to others because they say its right. fight the urges, fight that system, there are others out here who share your condition. Well written in its own special sense, the image created really hit close to home, besides the whole girl part. that was an attempt at shedding some light on a serious situation. All jokes aside, good job on the poem and im hoping to see more of your great work, your flow is undeniable and powerful. keep it up girl.... |