Deep inside me ...

by Caitlin   Mar 11, 2005


Why don't you get it?
Why don't you see?
My whole damn life
was never meant to be.

The real scars I have,
Deep inside me,
Will never show
It’s how it will be.

Nothing will change,
With in my life,
I can’t help it,
I'm always been in strife

Someone please help me,
What can I do?
Why aren’t you here?
Please, I really need you

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  • 19 years ago

    by Hayley

    deep, your good, keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie Ryanne

    hey thanks for the comment im not really trying to be a good writer especially when i write these the words just sorta write themselves...thats why i do it when im really upset it kinda really flows..neways thanks i love this poem...5/5...keep reading minre and ill keep reading urs.

    -Much Love
    Jamie

  • 19 years ago

    by K

    wow! i love that poem! it is really deep and true. i can relate to that. if u ever need to talk feel free to email me on: sweet_but_sour18@hotmail.com
    i would love to hear from u! thanx heaps
    keep writting uve got sum serious talent!
    luv,
    K xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by L0KA

    Wow. deep poem but I really liked it. Great job. If ya eva need to talk, e-mail me. Head up...
    Peaze.

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