Whats Wrong

by The Flame Within   Mar 11, 2005


I feel alone
i feel like a stone
trapt under the sand
feeling so mad
i cant wake up
i don't drink from my cup
food no longer matters
my feelings seem to scatter
my wrist looks tempting
my body feels empty
its all a bunch of bull
my mind is so full
of so many problems going in and out
and I'm trying to find what its all about
I'm starting to shout
of what i felt
i push it all aside
and just enjoy the ride
as life pushes me under
i try to take cover
my mind sets off a gong
as i realize something is wrong
but its to late
i wait for my fate
but i go on my way
hoping that i wake up to another day

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Nick, seriously, this poem sounds like a rap, and a good rap at that. Have you ever thought about rapping? lol. You'd prob. be good at it. :0). Take Care, Nick.

    I like how you describe your wrist in this poem and the last one. How fast do you produce these poems?

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Hey, Thank you so much for you comment. It really means a lot to mean.

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