Comments : Sweet insanity

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    excellent poem! loved the imagry in it and i can relate a lot sometimes. keep it up!

    ~*LorienElf*~

  • 15 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    "i'm in it for the prize
    i just wanna win
    and your crimson blood on my ivory skin
    will be my greatest desire
    its such a sweet sin"

    AMAZING ending. I love this piece.