Hey bro, great poem, it's really confusing but makes sense at the same time. (I'm not trying to imitate the poem BTW;)) It probably makes so much sense because I feel the exact same way a lot of the time. Anywho, keep it real! peace

Excellent job. I really enjoyed reading it. Take care and God bless! :-)

I feel the same way sometimes. Great poem!

i'm so tired of seeing crappy comments on your poems! so i will say this..
this poem is utterly gorgeous.
you need to write more!
i demand more!
until then i'm going on strike.
there...thats something "odd" for you to read.
♥
email me lovely.
SarA

this is a kewl write.. on of da best poems ive read this week
kudos:)

wow. that was a phenomanal poem. it had a lot of power. great write. LYMTAB!!! ciao~lyn

good poem...5

Love the metaphors and confusingness (if that's a word) or it. Reminds me of my two latest..the Metaphorical Murder ones (in case you happened to stumble upon them ;)). It was absolutely amazing and also mysterious.

Lipton, wow, that was amazing!! I don't think I could've described myself better!! my favorite part was "Offering of love, rendering me uneasy.
Always helping, the one that's not me.

Screaming inside, unsure of what's real.
Pretending to know, when I can’t even feel.
Crying endlessly, obstructing my view.
Unsure what to say, knowing what’s true."
You're really talented, I'm sure you hear that a lot, but it's true. A beautiful description of life and love, excellent write!

Wow, very powerful. Enjoyed very much reading this.
-A

Wow...I loved it. So contridictionary. Its like one of my poems "I am part three" sad yet so very well written, and filled with emotion 5/5

I really love reading your stuff I think I've read almost all of them now. Your an amazing writer I wish i was that good. I enjoy the emotion you put in them, it makes me feel like i'm more into them. Sorry about the rambling

great poem! its powerful and beautifully writen.
blessings
courtie

brilliant work. I enjoyed reading it.
you have a lot of talent.
take care,
marjan

I really love this piece. i guess it's cause i can relate to it! it's very nice! keep it up!

These poems are great, they are exactly what I look for when I read poetry- i mean exactly, your poems seem like things I would write haha
Like those time poems you have, I have a similar one with a similar message ill be posting soon

These are great- keep em comin