Comments : Failure In Disguise

  • 19 years ago

    by yup

    A beautiful poem. I really loved it. It touched me. Anyway great work. Keep writing.

    ~Kelly

  • 19 years ago

    by *melted*dreams*

    this is the way that i feel right now because i have this great bf and you just captured it and you are a great writer...great poem...keep on writing...5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Cassie

    Wow! I really really like that! It's really really good! I understand where you're coming from, you really put it into words for me exactly... good job 5/5 i'd really like to hear more of them! keep writing

  • 19 years ago

    by LeoPup198

    Beautiful! u always seem 2 find the perfect words for each line. im sorry u feel this way, u shouldnt, cuz not everything is ur fault. feel better soon and great job!!! a 5 as always!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by amanda

    really good poem hunn!! I hope this isn't really how you feel though... but it's a great poem 5/5.