loved it! excellent work! it flowed so well and everything just fit perfectly. loved the imagry and i can relate to it a bit too. very beautiful! keep it up!

~*LorienElf*~

Thanks xoxo

Wow...it seems I wonder those same things everyday! It really is a great poem, but if you cut yourself..thats not good:o( If you wanna talk to me ya can! hehe amazing poem! Keep your head up high okay! * Hugs *
5outta5 for sure!
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--Shannon--
Keep on writting hun!i

Thank you both!!!

xoxo

~Sierra

good poem, i like it. the emotions in this poem are deep and elabrate. I'm jealous of how good your poems are. well good luck with your writtings,

Hey, sweet poem. I hope you can reach out to way more people because this is amazing. Excellent piece of work. Hope you become published one day!

Thank you~~~ :-D!! You both really made me smile!! I appreciate your comments soo much. I am so obsessed with what people think, I check it quite often in one day. :0), thank you both so much~

xoxo!Sierra!xoxo

uuuhh......i dont even think i can comment on the awsomeness of this poem. you have me speachless. i mean this was so freakin awsome wow. that is a really good poem. i wanna say thank you for telling me that if i wanna talk you'll be there. and dang can you write haha. but hey do you have an email that i can keep in touch wit you. well keep up this awsome work. and back at you, if you ever need someone to talk to . ill be here for you ok.grea job

lmao, thanks Nick. I'm happy that you like it!! :-D. I'll be sure to stay in touch with you. Keep writing your poems because I love them a lot!! You have a unique style and you sound really cool, so I'll be sure to say in touch. Thank you for being there. I'm here whenever you need me.

Keep writing, I want to read more!!!

~Sierra

sierra@bophars.com

great poem! i love it! really this is amazing! i can relate so easily this poem rocks! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Thank you Taylor. I'm glad you like it. :-D, thank you for your comment!!!

This was pure brilliance. Really spectacular work, as always :).
-A

Hello hun!! Haven't logged on here for a while so thats why I didn't reply sooner! This is a fantastic poem hun!!!!!! Its awesome, and so so powerful. This bit was especially good:

Her eyes were once clear
As clear as broken glass
There were pools of moving water
But unfolding, alas

I can relate it to my poem 'shadow' too, which is cool! :-)

I read your post about the serial killer - sounds horrible!! I hope you and your mum are ok!!!!! Must have been SO scary! I know I would be seriously scared out of my mind. So I'm hoping you're both alright. I'm still here if you ever need to talk, about anything at all! Have you got msn messenger, because i could add you on there?? I hope you're alright hun, thinking of you - take care of yourself plz, I'm here for you!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxx

hehehel....as i've heard...lol i left a comment back.

OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD sierra i love ur poems they r just sooooooooo good omg omg pls dont be sad or i will cry xxxxxxxxxxxxx