No Blood Left

by ~*LorienElf*~   Mar 11, 2005


There's no more blood inside
The knife has taken it all away
I've all but suicide
But for now I'm forced to stay

That wicked knife took it all
Everything that I held dear
Now into the dark blood I fall
All it left was pain and fear

It will not give any back
No matter how much I plead
The only thing left is black
The blood is what I need

I search far and wide
For the knife that holds my fate
Before it commits my suicide
I just hope that I'm not too late

I finally find that knife
Bathing in my bloody pool
About to finally take my life
So selfish and so cruel

I try to fight his spell
But he swiftly overpowers me
From the new wounds blood fell
I guess I'll never truly be free

Forever to be a slave
Until I'm finally dead
It will follow me to my grave
Until all my blood is shed

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    No criticisms whatsoever for this one. Brilliant, well written, and powerful.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*LorienElf*~

    thanks for the advice, tonight i was just running it across my skin, and i accidently shed blood. i got really scared and immediately i stopped. i dont think i will ever ever do it again. it was much too frightening for me. well thanks for the advice and dont woorry, i wont anymore ever.

    ~*LorienElf*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Aw babe, I saw your post in the forum, about cutting. Aw, babe, please don't cut. It's more trouble than its really worth and its really scary, and more painful than you probably think it is. The scars never go, and if people around you offline find out, they'll ditch you like they did me. Its so unfair, but its the way it is. So, please, don't cut!!

    ~sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Excellent. I know that alot of people can relate to poems like this and I felt like I could flow with the words. Its hard to find good poemsl ike that. Props dear.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Lol, wow, great one LorienElf, you got a lot of comments. Congragulations!! hehehe, sry I went to bed on u last night. I was exhausted!! Anyhow, hope to talk to you soon! Bye

    ~Sierra

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