Ahh, this was so eerie, creepy, spine-trembling, and everything!! (btw...that's a good thing, lol) I loved reading this and I think it was worth every second that I took reading it. The whole concept was so bizarre that it worked so well!! Great job, keep writing.

~Sierra

You're welcome. I quite enjoyed this poem. I also assume we're like the only two people up at this hour. :0), once again, great poem.

lol thx, ya probably we are..o well lol

~*LorienElf*~

Wow...took my breath away. I used to cut myself...bad. And all the memories flooded back reading this, and I think you are...just astounding. I mean, this poem goes beyond all comprehension. I am at a loss for words to describe how truly talented you are. Thank you for writing such an awesome (literally in awe) poem.

Lol, wow, great one LorienElf, you got a lot of comments. Congragulations!! hehehe, sry I went to bed on u last night. I was exhausted!! Anyhow, hope to talk to you soon! Bye

~Sierra

Excellent. I know that alot of people can relate to poems like this and I felt like I could flow with the words. Its hard to find good poemsl ike that. Props dear.

Aw babe, I saw your post in the forum, about cutting. Aw, babe, please don't cut. It's more trouble than its really worth and its really scary, and more painful than you probably think it is. The scars never go, and if people around you offline find out, they'll ditch you like they did me. Its so unfair, but its the way it is. So, please, don't cut!!

~sierra

thanks for the advice, tonight i was just running it across my skin, and i accidently shed blood. i got really scared and immediately i stopped. i dont think i will ever ever do it again. it was much too frightening for me. well thanks for the advice and dont woorry, i wont anymore ever.

~*LorienElf*~

No criticisms whatsoever for this one. Brilliant, well written, and powerful.