HOw dEEp?

by stephyG   Mar 11, 2005


Doors locked
musics pumping
eyes are closed
heart is thumping
Hands are ready
Sleeves rolled up
pills lay there
by the cup
Waters running
towel is hot
wrapped around
lets find the spot
knife in hand
here we go
the 1st slit
watch it flow
Just how deep
will i go?

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  • 19 years ago

    by AKA

    wow that blew me away thats really greate scary but greate good work!!

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    really liked this poem, the rhyming's fab and the poem itself really built up a lot of emotion, keep it up! il have to check out more of ya stuf

    take care always, lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    wow your style and flow is wicked! makes me want to read alot more.
    5/5 for sure
    xox bam

  • 19 years ago

    by Lithium

    thats cool but sad, i hope u knwo u don't have to do this dont' be afraid to speak up xox sam
    p.s. ur now in my favourites ur just to good lol :P

  • 19 years ago

    by Shalane

    I love this poem because this is so popular in the world today, and not many people want to talk about it, and you did!I l think it's a nice poem.