In you

by broken angel   Mar 11, 2005


In your eyes, I see all the sadness in the world

In your voice, I hear the whole world's hate

In your scars, I see the loss that tears at you

On your lips, you whisper words of fate

In your skin, I feel every fiber of fear

In your tears, I taste how you drown

In your smile, I feel you crying

On your lies, the words that tear you down

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  • 19 years ago

    by Someone

    Cool poem, I liked it :-)

    ** 5 **

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Very epic depiction of what happens. It is a really good poem and i liked how you used in your or on your for the metaphores. They are really nice and i am glad that you could choose something that we all know and we all can see, i know that there is a lot of things that are great in the world.

    Five/Five

    P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem, I am not dating at the moment. i don't know if something happens perhaps i will date, as of right now i am just content with being myself..i am tired of women thinking the world revovles around them.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Wow, that was original and unique. I truly liked it a lot! Great one!

    ~Sierra

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