by Just Sierra
Wow, that was original and unique. I truly liked it a lot! Great one! |
by Dark Savior
Very epic depiction of what happens. It is a really good poem and i liked how you used in your or on your for the metaphores. They are really nice and i am glad that you could choose something that we all know and we all can see, i know that there is a lot of things that are great in the world. |
by Someone
Cool poem, I liked it :-) |