nice poem/song :S lol!!! 5/5! plz vote n comment on my work! id really appreciate it! thx

Hayley xx

Nice poem. the rhyming is very good and makes it all flow along well. I'm not sure what a 'lyric poem' is, is it a song? Well if it is then this would work well as a song also. I think the ending was really nice, kinda like in the end you've given up and don't really care anymore. Nice write :)

Great poem btw thnx for the comment it means alot 5/5