Lonely Cries

by Red Charm   Mar 11, 2005


You look at me you see a disguise
Because my life is nothing but lies
You can't hear my lonely cries
Your too wrapped up in my disguise
So when you finally start to lie
I will never ask please why?
Don't bother with sad goodbyes
Just ignore my broken cries
Pain will stay covered by my disguise
Don't worry I'll tell you nothing but lies
And go unheard with lonely cries

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  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    I loved this one I loved the title too

    Unloved ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Elynnka

    this one's cool too, i like it very much:)
    plz comment/vote on my poem "i represent all and nothing", thx. *hugs*

    keep it up!:

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by cac123

    i really liked it but i think it could have flowed better but again keep reinventing yourself you have an awesome gift and you know how to use it. Great poem

    5/5
    **~**

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel E F Allen

    Thanks for your comment. Have taken some time to read through your work and think that you have a beautiful simplicity to your writing (the sign of a truly expressive poet), you manage to convey in a few words what it takes others (me included) twenty or thirty, and you're so young!!!!!!! An incredibly promising talent keep it up. Love Rach xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Excellent poem - I love the meaning and your rhymes. Wonderful! :-) Thanks for the comment. Take care and God bless! <3

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