Notice Me

by Nat the dreamer   Mar 11, 2005


I need to know more about you

Your fears, dreams, anything you do

Eyes wandering around the room, just take a glance.

Stare back into my eyes, under some kind of trance.

Walking with your head hanging down.

Speak no words, make no sound.

I'd give anything to make you smile.

Anything to make it last awhile.

Anything so I could see...

You staring right back at me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    WOW!! Story of my life!! Lately I've had feelings for one of my friends but he's basically been ignoring me, and I, too, would give anything to have him look at me the way I look at him. Great poem and keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Kelly

    I like this alot. Probably cause I can relate to it. I noticed that your rating was 5.0...with 6 votes already. So apparently alot of other people liked it enough to vote for it and can relate to it. I just thought I'd drop you a line, and personally tell you that I really really like this poem.

    Kel*