Dust in the Wind

by EpithetPoet   Mar 12, 2005


\\\"Dust in the wind\\\"
Never knew what that meant
Til the message i received
Was heaven sent

God it seemed
Painted blood across my face
Labelling your true crime
Your final last disgrace

Brandishing my forhead
As your one only friend
And why i couldnt save you
From your sudden end

How my tears feel that day
Slding down your cheek
Replaying the moments of each day
Of each and every week

I held you so tightly
Though i knew you were dead
Quietly rocked in my arms
Kissed you gently on your head

The last tears we shed together
Though mine would still come
But bringing me the knowledge
Where \\\"dust in the wind\\\" comes from

\\\"All we are is dust in the wind...\\\"

-A

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  • 19 years ago

    by «-Pale-Petals-»

    wow, that really hit me. great job al.

    Love always
    Samz]]

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    OMG!!!! That was so touching. It sent shivers down my spine, so many times!!! Every line held so much emotion, its still impacting on my brain. I mean holy crap!!!! The very plot was so intriguing!!! You had me the whole entire time!!!!

    Great job!!!!! Loved it!

    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Wonderful poem as usual girleh. I loved it, there were so many lines that just smacked me in the face. Well done. <<33

    Luffuuls You
    ;;--Kalah

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Wow..this poem was really beautiful..Great job! I liked it all..but these lines really stuck out to me:
    I held you so tightly
    Though i knew you were dead
    Quietly rocked in my arms
    Kissed you gently on your head
    But the whole poem was so excellent!
    Keep it up!:o)
    ~Touching Evil~
    --Shannon--

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