Wow..this poem was really beautiful..Great job! I liked it all..but these lines really stuck out to me:
I held you so tightly
Though i knew you were dead
Quietly rocked in my arms
Kissed you gently on your head
But the whole poem was so excellent!
Keep it up!:o)
~Touching Evil~
--Shannon--

Wonderful poem as usual girleh. I loved it, there were so many lines that just smacked me in the face. Well done. <<33

Luffuuls You
;;--Kalah

OMG!!!! That was so touching. It sent shivers down my spine, so many times!!! Every line held so much emotion, its still impacting on my brain. I mean holy crap!!!! The very plot was so intriguing!!! You had me the whole entire time!!!!

Great job!!!!! Loved it!

~Sierra

wow, that really hit me. great job al.

Love always
Samz]]