by StormyWeather Mar 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
What happened to my daddy? |
You are totally awesome..impressing... |
I loved it. It was filled with lots of emotion. It had a great rhythem, except for the last line. Somethimes it's a good thing, I think in this poem it is because you bring the suprise of how your mother is gone. Nice work I will look forward to reading more. |
great poem abbi~!!!~ keep it up. 5/5 |
by Emilia
Great poem Abbi! I like this one a lot... I voted a 5 for this one.. take care |
thanks i'll change that |