it isn't true thank god but it happened to a girl in a book i read and it really got to me so i wrote a poem bout it!

thanks i'll change that
abbi x

Great poem Abbi! I like this one a lot... I voted a 5 for this one.. take care

great poem abbi~!!!~ keep it up. 5/5

I loved it. It was filled with lots of emotion. It had a great rhythem, except for the last line. Somethimes it's a good thing, I think in this poem it is because you bring the suprise of how your mother is gone. Nice work I will look forward to reading more.

You are totally awesome..impressing...