by Jacklyn Mar 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Have you ever felt ignored? |
by Andrea
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i really like this poem! great write! |
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Yes, I have felt/done all of those but the sex one and getting drunk....great poem, I liked the comparisons -5 |
by Carmen
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Very sad... I think you could make it rhyme better, but it was still pretty good. |
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I am nodding at some of the lines in this - the drunk part most deffinatley. This was wonderfully written my friend. |