by Jacklyn Mar 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Have you ever felt ignored? |
by Andrea
i really like this poem! great write! |
Yes, I have felt/done all of those but the sex one and getting drunk....great poem, I liked the comparisons -5 |
by Carmen
Very sad... I think you could make it rhyme better, but it was still pretty good. |
I am nodding at some of the lines in this - the drunk part most deffinatley. This was wonderfully written my friend. |