I am nodding at some of the lines in this - the drunk part most deffinatley. This was wonderfully written my friend.
Nighteh Nighteh <<33

Luffuuls Yew
;;--Kalah

Very sad... I think you could make it rhyme better, but it was still pretty good.

Yes, I have felt/done all of those but the sex one and getting drunk....great poem, I liked the comparisons -5

with love,
Heather

i really like this poem! great write!