Wow....So sad! Keep up the good work! Loved it!

Thank you Carmen.

hehe Wow..another amazing poem! I really like it..These lines really stuck out for me, and I really loved them.
I walk for hours
Staring at the all the passing cars
Basking beneath
All of the darkened stars
Awesome verse! But the whole poem was excellent! Keep it up!
Well Done:o)
5outta5 from me
---Shannon--

Very very good poem i love the flow it has.
I think that if Lance didnt like my poem then he shouldnt have said anything because to be fair it wasnt even constructive criticism and i do honour people's opinions, but he was harsh, but thank you for telling me that and there are no bad feelings on my part at all!!
Again fab poem.

take care

Thank you both. I harbor no ill feelings toward you or Lance, Victoria. I'm glad that you're open minded though, and thank you for your comment on my poem, both of you.

Shannon, lol, I love that line most, but I do know that this poem is crap, I wrote it in like 5 minutes, so thank you both for being really nice about it, lol. Shannon, you're too sweet. lol.

Thank you both again!!!