by Antonio Stefan Mar 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I once thought my destiny is forever sealed |
by Lindsay C
this is really beautiful too! you are so very talented! keep writing! post more and i will definitely read em! 5/5 |
by Amilo
Obviously full of emotion, although I don't think I like this one as much as the other poem you've written. I thought the rhyme scheme was too predictable and a little forced and randomly placed. But I'm sure Adina is lucky to have such a wonderful lover. Keep writing. |
by Amit
~ excellent poem my friend! gr8 one |
by katie!
Wow, a very well written, readable poem, really enjoyable, I liked the style of the poem and it was great, well done 5 |
I liked it, especially how the number of lines in the stanzas alternated between 4 and 5 and then 6 at the end. I definetly agree that you need to write more! |