Hey, I am glad that this isn't about your own father, I was abit worried then!! But great poem anyways, loved the way you described the feelings so well, very effective. Keep writing, your stuff is good. And thanks for commenting on my poems, means alot!
~Love alwayz xemmax~

well.. actually.. it is about my dad, but yeah..... thanks for commenting.. means alot!

wow really good! you have probably noticed i have commented o all your poems! they're brilliant you have so much talent! like emma said, it's really effective! luv ya, lucy x

thanks

I love it so much
great job
its so amazing!!
5/5 and u cant take nothing less!!