by David Paul Mar 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
He looks to his side and see's her talking, |
by erikka baby
I loved this poem. It showed a lot of emotion and it was written beautifully. The rhyming was also very even. xX |
by Sarah Ann
Excellent job. I once felt like that. I am running out of words to say about your stunning work. keep it up. you are on my favs now. xxx |
by Minkus
That was excellent, my eyes are red. I don't see how anyone can rate this anything but a 5... amazing. Great job here. |
David it's truly sensational.I can truly relate to it.Honestly I can. |
by Lil Luce
i liked this altho i think u ned to check for a few spelling mistakes lol i thought it was a good poem.xxx |