That was beautiful and so creative. What can i say, i loved it! You are talented, I loved this one. Keep on writing good poems, 5/5 for this one.
SatuzKa

Wow very well done u have such a talent for writing keep it up. Exellent poem is all I can say it was different and I liked that alot! Check out some of mine if u would Thanx. I will read more of urs when I have more time.

Great poem Hans! 5 stars for this one.
Keep it up.. Please check out my poem "The Silver Moon Sparkling"
Take Care. Hugs