Dead love

by Barbara Jean   Mar 12, 2005


The day you died
I didnt know what to do
I sat here all day and cried
just thinking of you

What am i going to do now
your gone and im all alone
all i have is your picture to show
with the smell of your cologne

I loved you so much
I dont know what to do
I miss your touch
I want to die just to be with you

DO YOU KNOW A GOOD TITLE FOR THIS?

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  • 19 years ago

    by D..

    Lonely without you????
    memories???
    really lovely poem and very sad
    can relate
    Best wishes Doreen5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by chibi

    mmm...for the title, maybe Too In Love With You....im not sure, this is a toughie

  • I think the title is good...this was a great poem, one that I can easily relate to. Great job, 5/5 and thanks for your comment on my new poem. MuchLoveAlways Xunseen~tearsX

  • 19 years ago

    by Chris

    I agree with killer. A good title might be Lost

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    well done, good poem, Sorry Im not that good at poem titles, keep it up xx