by ((Allison)) Mar 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I don't want to be here |
by Dorotea©
Over all, I really liked this poem. The flow was pretty good too, except in the second and the last parts of the poem it was a bit different from the other parts. But it was a very good poem, i enjoyed reading it. i'll give it 4, keep on writing. |
by katie!
Wow, very good poem well done 5/5 |