It's not totally finished i don't think, but i just can't decide whether or not i should keep going with it, and i can't decide what category it should be in. So if u have any comments let me know, thanx!

Hey! Thanks a lot for your comments--they mean a lot. And keep going with this--you could develop it in so many ways! It's awesome! Thanks again!

Wow. It's really powerful. Definitely a five from me. Keep writing! Thanks for your comments, once again!