Your emotions really showed up through the poem, the words seemed to come to life, and there were absolutely no flaws in your perfect flow. Amazing poetry.

Peace. [Sole]

Deep, emtional scars. excellent write. And an even better read. this is so sad yet i can relate, perfect word choice, raw emtions, twisted and warped images of a not so perfect childhood. I would have been at a loss if I had not read this poem, it is truly one of the better reads on this site, so 5/5 isn't as far fetched on this one. I liked this poem so much I am adding you and it to my favorites good job, and please keep writting.

Aww.. i love this poem.. its so sad but still written so beautifully.. again some lines seemed to go on too long.. but other than that it was an enjoyable read filled with a lot of emotion that you expressed wonderfully :D

I loved this poem, it was really interesting to read.
I think it was a little long, and breaking it into stanza's would make it flow better, but i still enjoyed it alot
best wishes
Tara-Kay
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