by Hurtingsoul Mar 13, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Walking on the edge of flaming fire |
by Fallen Angel
Gd luv ya |
Hey, i liked this poem alot. I liked the rhyming, it seemed random but it still read really well. |
i loved this poem, the last stanza is beautful, it was a wonderful way to end the poem |
by ~*Ley*~
this was excellent but the rhymes were a bit forced try extending your vocabulary a bit |
Great write. This poem was freakin awesome. <3333 |