ooh well written and the title is amazing! love it -5

with love,
Heather

great poem! i love it! so beautifully written! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Bad not at all it was very well done as ur others!

I liked it well done

I really liked this one, it was a bit scary in the beginning, but it was good. There's only one thing that i would change. I think the beginning is great, but in the end, like Killer of Time said, the rhyming starts to get "forced" and the flow isnt that good anymore. I think if you work a bit more on this one it will be very good, and i can tell you obviously have talent. Keep on writing.
SatuzKa

You are good at writing poems :)

omGG realli good well done XOxox StephZ

woohoo i really like it alot! it just flows and still u make a point! awesome job and keep it up! i have it a 5/5

much love
savannah

Great poem. You're vocabulary is so much better than mine.

Good job

are you kidding no way was that bad! it was really good, very inspirational! keep it up! and thanks so much for your comment...it meant alot
xxxChristinaxxx

Great write. This poem was freakin awesome. <3333

this was excellent but the rhymes were a bit forced try extending your vocabulary a bit
~Freak~

i loved this poem, the last stanza is beautful, it was a wonderful way to end the poem

Hey, i liked this poem alot. I liked the rhyming, it seemed random but it still read really well.
The poem focused on the reason behind you writing instead of trying to get everything to rhyme perfectly.

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it !!

xxx cici xxx

Gd luv ya