Great poem! Keep up the good work.. I give you 5/5 for this one..
Please check out my poems.... it would mean a lot.. Take Care

This is a really good poem and has a good flow. Good Job! 5/5. Love Emma xxx

Great poem. It flows really well. I give you a five. Thanks for the comment on my work as well. Lol I know its weird but hey, im not a very good writer!
Take care and keep writing,
Rachelxx

hey...good peom...yeh it flows really well. i give it a five, and ur work is really good. keep it up.