WOW!!! i love this, it rhymes awsomely!! it was soo sad to i think! i love the last part! it was my favorite! maybe u could check out some of my poems??? taht be great if u did!! kk thanx! take care!
*-*Kat*-*

~ excellent poem, very well written
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit
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defently feeling that second stanza,beautifully sad...i wish you all the love in the world!...God bless you!

with love,
Heather
ps 5/5

"You melted my rainbows and darkened the skies"

This line is absolutely amazing! I mean wow...melted rainbows, very creative! I love the easy flow througout the entire piece! And of course the whole poem is brilliant! What else should I expect from you :) Holly

This is an awesome poem... very beautiful, yet sad. I loved it. I hope you're doing well.
Take care & God bless. :o)

Wow. Near rhythmical perfection...this is gorgeous...Your words are a pleasure to read; captivating. Thank you for sharing your work..I can't wait to read more.
rose oxo

Great poem. Beautifully written. Keep up the writing please. Nice chatting with you too!

awww your an awesome writer. i love your poems