Look At Me

by Carlee Ann   Mar 13, 2005


Look at me:
What do you see?
Someone smart?
Or someone with a hurting heart?

All of them demand perfection,
To fix their mistakes with my correction
And the think it's easy for me,
But they can't really see

They don't hear my internal cry,
They don't feel the pain inside,
Because I won't show my hurt
When I feel like God-forsaken dirt

I can get through,
I always do,
But it's hard, you see,
Because nobody really looks at me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    You are waaay too sweet! I love you lots!
    *Car*

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    carlee, i dont know what's wrong with the world! you are the best ever, and i mean that in every possible way! you dont deseve to feel hurt about anything... you are a rock star, and nobody can change that. dont feel reluctant to let some emotions out sometimes, though. if you keep them bottled up, you might end up doing something stupid... like i did, and it would kill me to see you do something like that!!! i love you to the moon and back, carlee!!!
    *Zac*

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Ty, Katie, you are too too nice!
    *Car*

  • wow...that poem was so awesome...it had alot of emotion in it. I printed it out and put it on my wall (I hope its ok) That was an awesome poem, great job!